雨~打濕了寂寞
不解風情的它
讓我陷入寂寞深淵
雨~帶來了遺憾
自作多情的我
小小的心願隨著水珠破滅
在底下
匯集成更深的遺憾
雨~始終未停歇
是否知道它釀下了大禍
剔透的冰滴映照著傷感
一滴一滴
未曾停歇
雨~是天在流淚
妳哭了嗎?
透明的讓人輕易看透
妳也在為我傷心嗎?
那從未停歇的思念
是被妳忽略的我
雲化成點點雨水
是要讓妳知道
有個人
在妳從未親臨的角落
默默守護著
屬於妳 關於我的回憶
忘記了嗎?
我替妳記著
直到我們哪天相遇
好開啟回憶的音樂盒與妳分享
雨~停了
它了解我
我已再度陷入思念深淵
雨後的空氣
混雜著思念的氣味
是我自作多情嗎?
我只是默默守護著
關於妳 屬於我的回憶
許下一個願~
期盼下個雨淋濕的夏季
能再讓我們相逢
妳會來嗎?
雨神的拖延
只是為了相逢的喜悅
約好了
雨天是我們的暗號
充滿回憶的音樂盒
需要與思念的人共同開啟
我會等著
等著時機的來臨
等著我們相遇時機的來臨
還記得我嗎?
那個拎著回憶 戴著思念
陷入深淵的雨天男孩
文章標籤
全站熱搜
部落格小說 (3)
雨天總會讓人想起太多事.......
記得這篇文章是我在感觸很深的時後即興寫下的 那時腦中的確很混亂
You poem moves me to tears ! Love it !
Thanks for your compliments. I wrote it in a sorrow mood that I didn't think alot, but I just followed my feeling.
Thank you for your response. I have been trying to visit your page but couldn't find it. I just typed some words of your poem and finally find it after 6 months later. I just re-read your poem and it is still touching me a lot. I hope that you are doing fine now.
It's no matter how long have been before you responded me. What I really care is that my poem can definitely cure somebody's bad feelings. And you have read it for so many times, I am happy that you like it. Thanks for your reading again. What you do has given me power to type more articles.
想借來一用，寫日記
寫得太美了! 可以借我節錄一小段嗎^^